Correct and improve my essay.

August 4, 2021/in /by Dennis

this parper is about a Chinese film called “The Dream Factory”

here is the link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v59-SWuduR4

How it does not have engilsh subtitles.

You will need it if u you want to see the clips I mentioned in the paper.

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